It's a slippery slope Bro I'm addicted to them now never thought I would be interested I you liked this try the likes of neko paradise , Radient, polarity and avalon just for a few I apologise in advance as you are gonna loose some time ha ha
When I first saw the game, I didn't give much for it. I just thought it would be that kind of pointless game with sex with a poor story and no interest whatsoever. Glad I decided to check the comments and description. After 15h of gameplay and exploring each aspect of the game, I have to say that this may be one of the best graphic novels (and stories for that matter) that I've seen recently.
The way that every character takes place in the story, slowly revealing their contribution to the main lore (with the notable exception of Charlotte) is perfectly built, permitting the player to explore and analyze the plot from several perspectives.
With that being said, I still have to point some ideas that are worth noticing.
1 - Too many girls, too little boys.
Yes, I understand that, no matter how much I like the game because of its plot, it is still an adult game. However, I can't stop to think that the existence of only 5 male characters (one of them being just a store seller and one of the others being someone we haven't crossed with yet) is... extremely bad. I'm not saying that it isn't good as it is, but I think that adding some other interactable men would be a good way to make the game more diverse and less focused on the sex part of it.
2 - Needs balance
Everything is so expensive. But don't get me right, I'm not saying the prices should be lower. I think that jobs should give more money. Until we get a higher level of either charisma, knowledge, or subtility, everything is just out of the player's budget. He would need to save for weeks to buy that one thing that is required to keep going in the story. After some thought, I think the best way to fix that would be adding some sort of part-time that would give a reasonable amount of money (ranging from 15$ to 30$) while consuming a unit of time. However (and here is the catch) that source of money would only be available for the first couple of weeks, who knows the first month. That way, the player can get some money to fix stuff like the bar, buy more books, advance in the story...
3 - Books
I love the idea of the library, but it simply is... poorly implemented. I think that the books should be slightly more powerful (like being able to read 2 books of 2 different perks in a time unit) or there should be an actual reason why the player would spend his pennies on books rather than training with the characters.
4 - Something missing After a long thought, I can distinguish something missing in the gameplay, but I don't know what it is. My gut says that some sort of minigame during the work hours and the gambling is the key, making it possible to earn a few extra bucks. I don't know, I was always looking forward to more story and less everything else.
With that being said, I have to say that I loved the story. Everything, from Prim's development with the player to the entire relationship with Maxy/Mary (loved that reveal, can't wait to see more) and even how Sasha and Layla try to explain and give us clues about how the universe of Lucky Paradox actually works. I can't wait for the next update which, apparently is going to give a lot of new gameplay and story, as well as a brand new level of mystery which, I must say, is the only thing that makes me love this game unlike all others of its kind.
About the balance, I think you're right. I think it's very extremist, some people always need money and others have too much. I have to rethink the formulas, but it's not an easy thing to do right :(
About the library, that's content that hasn't been finished. Although I think the idea of combining attributes is great.
Thanks again for taking the time to do a review of the game :D
Sería algo que nunca eh visto aún que se pueda forzar a los personajes a tener relaciones por ejemplo a la mujer del casino o la hermana de la que vende calabazas
I just got through the available content and Love what you've done with this game I have some feedback that may be of interest to you. It may be a bit long, but I see so much potential both tapped and untapped I'm excited to share my thoughts. The first thing is something I quite enjoyed, which were the unexpected event or arrivals that made my plans go wild, When I would be set on accomplishing a set of things that day there would be an event or something that would make me put it off a while longer, or I might forget. IT feels realistic and even investing, given that days dont always go as planned IRL and so long as I still have agency (or decisions I can make) if feels like an adventure more so. When my guard was down , I thought less in terms of scores and achievement and and the stories and characters were more engaging and were able to reach me more easily.
One thing I feel could be better is some of the interface to make it easier or more seamless to navigate, just having more of an option when you have a keyboard. It may be lazy of me but at least having a 'Map' key to zoom out to the town, or a key for the character stats and the girls. Over all I feel this would add some some smoothness.
I hesitate to suggest additions to a developer given you probably already have a long enough list and a vision of your own for this project. That being said there a couple things that would be neat to see. One would be simply an option to go into the wilderness considering how much of it there is on the map (whatever else is included in it, were you to do this, I'm sure you'd do great.) The second is the ability to alter the main guys responses in conversation or arguments a tad more, to decide your stance with an issue or conflict. Even just more context specific options. For instance when Maxy left it kinda shook me, and my instinct was to talk to the others about it. Though there was no dialogue acknowledging what had transpired though they live in such close proximity, At the very least the main guy would probably be a bit down, perhaps mention it in his interactions. Last thing I swear, I feel like your game would have a lot more replay ability if it were not possible to romance more than one or all of the girls without some minor-major consequences. Maybe more Friend options, not simply Accept OR Reject. Like some 'Yes and', 'yes but', 'no and', 'no but' responses rather than only the variations of positive or negative, yes or no.
I hope this is helpful if only mildly. Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing how you complete and flesh out everything.
Im low key hoping for an awkward or silly scene between Velvet and Lucky. I've been imagining edgy Kamen Rider vibes from this Velvet.
Some of your ideas will be implemented at some point, but others are too complex for me to do (they require a lot of time to do), for now it's just me working on this game :(
Thank you very much for taking the time to write all this <3
Feels like I am going in circles with the girls, not sure how to unlock all of the content. I bought the drum set, screw driver, and the bar but it feels like a stretch between stories and I'm not sure if I am doing it right.
You have to click on that human or person symbol at the top right of the screen and then go to the "Characters" section. Click on the box called "Side Events" for each girl. You can see what you need to do next to trigger a new event. If it says "Chat: Available" Then chat with them some more to trigger new events and dialogue. If it say "Chat:WIP" that means that area is done for now. Focus on other areas. If it says "Practice: Available" practice with her in that area (color) Red practice color means train with her in Fitness. "Beach: Available" means you can go to the beach with her at certain times to trigger more events of new dialogue. If something says "WIP" you can still do i, you just wont trigger a new scene or dialogue. I hope that's what you meant.
Yo so I am stuck on this layla thing it tells me to visit her to checkout her invention but I don't know when or how there doesn't seem to be a hint at all
This is one of the best games ive ever played, your whole work is spectacular and i need this to be a full game, please never abandon this game til it's complete. And... I know is a lot to ask but, in a future version or the complete game can you put a female protagonist version of the story and Lucky? We the lesbi girls don't have games like this and this game is perfect. Keep the hard work, you're doing great 💞
Que bueno que conoceremos a la hermana de fresita XD una pregunta en cierta parte de la historia maxy y charlotte hablan de hacer un trio pero charlotte no quiere esa ecena existe a un no?
Oh ok, But i actualy enter the room But i did not saved It, the nxt time i Play my last load I cant Enter, The last part is About Anton Sacrificing Hes life For the MC and then The Game Quit it Self.
hi Stawer gg for the nice game u create...only a little question.....im at day 100 i finish all quest line....now mary and maxy tell me she will come back in a few days but they never come back....how can i visit her home if never compare in the maps??i need to finish 2 special hit with maxy and i die if i cant finish it.....really thanks for all and keep the great work up....
btw: Layla's shower scene is missing in the gallery
I will grind every skill to 300 and the Barrie's popularity will be over 10000. Currently: Fitness 132, Charm 103, Creativity (around) 39, Subtlety 131or133 and Knowledge 105, Barrie's popularity 1567.
Love your game. Every girl is best girl material. If there was a choice it would take me a while to pick one. Well designed characters.
The only thing i take issue with is how they fall for the player out of nowhere (Yui and Maxy). Yui i sort of get and Maxy i sort of get but they fell for Lucky right there and there "poof". I both get it and don't. I'm sure you will explain in further detail for Yui, and hope you will give Maxy a bit more of a reason than just "I just felt like it" which i love. I'm just baffled at how we are a mega chick magnet. Feels wrong to be given a reward such as Maxy's interest, for existing. Good game
dunno where to report this, but: when you finish 4.02 Prim story you get to sleep with her.
I didn't finish her Charisma training scenes beforehand and had done it just after having sex with her. THE PROBLEM IS, in these scenes she is in "being afraid of MC's shlong size" mode
kind of broke my anticipation a little.
Hope there is like alternate cutscene if you already slept with her :)
By the way, I love this game and characters, so thank you Stawer for delivering us this pretty and fun expirionce.
I'm grinding and finnishing Prim scenes first. So... Do i have to go through other characters to go to the beach with Prim? What is the limit for all stats? Is 404 popularity too much?
Eh, nothing major and it's probably just me. It's just mildly frustrating trying to raise money and skills and having an entire day eaten up by an event. But I get that that's part of the game.
So I've been unable to install the previous update (0.4.0) since it was released. I'm on Android and it has said app not installed every time. I've been waiting for the new update to see if it works. I really enjoy the game and am looking forward to finally being able to play again. Keep up the good work!
You may need to give permissions, and Android is blocking the application... Or maybe you have the previous version already installed, in that case you should backup the saved games...
I'm only at the begining (around 30 ingame days) but the game looks very good so far ! The story is unfolding slowly but looks really interesting and mysterious, the characters have different and well built personalities so yeah all in all it's quite refreshing playing a game like this and not another "a horny teenager gets in a new town and fucks his relatives on the first day" type of game.
I'm curious if there are any secret/hidden "unlockable" things in the game yet or cheats and if not are you planning to add some in the future ?
For now there is only one secret final event. In version 0.5 there will be a few more, although they are only to complement the main story... For the H content it's much easier and straightforward :)
Se me ocurrió algo que creo que sería útil para muchos que donde esta la información del personaje ponga cuanto porsentaje llEva uno con la chica para saber cuando uno termina al 100% todas la escenas, conversaciones y esas cosas ya que aveces nose si seguir cuando dice que espere la próxima actualización o también un sistema de chequeo que en vez del porcentaje que dije ponga por ejemplo
Conversaciones: completado
Ecenas: incompleto
Contenido: incompleto
Algo así si pudieras en algún futuro sería eso nada más y haces un macnifico trabajo te felicito y creo que hablo por toda la comunidad que nos encantó su proyecto
En el estado de personajes te dice como desbloquear contenido secundario y principal. Cuando ya no hay nada nuevo por hacer, sale un WIP (Work in Progress)
Es difícil hacer un sistema con %, ya que muchas cosas cambian o no llegan a suceder, o suceden de una forma distinta según como vallas jugando.
Quizás deba hacer un tutorial para la version 0.5 explicando cositas.
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please make more
what is the name of the song for the memory selection menu?
El juego aún no tiene un final verdad?
No, aun falta mucho xD
Holy fucking shit I didnt expect to get this invested in a visual novel. The writing is amazing and I NEED MOAR
It's a slippery slope Bro I'm addicted to them now never thought I would be interested I you liked this try the likes of neko paradise , Radient, polarity and avalon just for a few I apologise in advance as you are gonna loose some time ha ha
Warning: Giant review
When I first saw the game, I didn't give much for it. I just thought it would be that kind of pointless game with sex with a poor story and no interest whatsoever. Glad I decided to check the comments and description. After 15h of gameplay and exploring each aspect of the game, I have to say that this may be one of the best graphic novels (and stories for that matter) that I've seen recently.
The way that every character takes place in the story, slowly revealing their contribution to the main lore (with the notable exception of Charlotte) is perfectly built, permitting the player to explore and analyze the plot from several perspectives.
With that being said, I still have to point some ideas that are worth noticing.
1 - Too many girls, too little boys.
Yes, I understand that, no matter how much I like the game because of its plot, it is still an adult game. However, I can't stop to think that the existence of only 5 male characters (one of them being just a store seller and one of the others being someone we haven't crossed with yet) is... extremely bad. I'm not saying that it isn't good as it is, but I think that adding some other interactable men would be a good way to make the game more diverse and less focused on the sex part of it.
2 - Needs balance
Everything is so expensive. But don't get me right, I'm not saying the prices should be lower. I think that jobs should give more money. Until we get a higher level of either charisma, knowledge, or subtility, everything is just out of the player's budget. He would need to save for weeks to buy that one thing that is required to keep going in the story. After some thought, I think the best way to fix that would be adding some sort of part-time that would give a reasonable amount of money (ranging from 15$ to 30$) while consuming a unit of time. However (and here is the catch) that source of money would only be available for the first couple of weeks, who knows the first month. That way, the player can get some money to fix stuff like the bar, buy more books, advance in the story...
3 - Books
I love the idea of the library, but it simply is... poorly implemented. I think that the books should be slightly more powerful (like being able to read 2 books of 2 different perks in a time unit) or there should be an actual reason why the player would spend his pennies on books rather than training with the characters.
4 - Something missing
After a long thought, I can distinguish something missing in the gameplay, but I don't know what it is. My gut says that some sort of minigame during the work hours and the gambling is the key, making it possible to earn a few extra bucks. I don't know, I was always looking forward to more story and less everything else.
With that being said, I have to say that I loved the story. Everything, from Prim's development with the player to the entire relationship with Maxy/Mary (loved that reveal, can't wait to see more) and even how Sasha and Layla try to explain and give us clues about how the universe of Lucky Paradox actually works. I can't wait for the next update which, apparently is going to give a lot of new gameplay and story, as well as a brand new level of mystery which, I must say, is the only thing that makes me love this game unlike all others of its kind.
I can only say: well done.
Wow thank you for this great review :D
About the balance, I think you're right. I think it's very extremist, some people always need money and others have too much. I have to rethink the formulas, but it's not an easy thing to do right :(
About the library, that's content that hasn't been finished. Although I think the idea of combining attributes is great.
Thanks again for taking the time to do a review of the game :D
So how many endings are there on the final version of the game?
Every girl has a different route. Each one has 2 or 3 possible endings.
For the "grand finale" all those possibilities are mixed together.
However, there is no good or bad route.
Sería algo que nunca eh visto aún que se pueda forzar a los personajes a tener relaciones por ejemplo a la mujer del casino o la hermana de la que vende calabazas
Desde la siguiente actualización habrá la posibilidad de contenido secundario con otras chicas :)
I just got through the available content and Love what you've done with this game I have some feedback that may be of interest to you. It may be a bit long, but I see so much potential both tapped and untapped I'm excited to share my thoughts.
The first thing is something I quite enjoyed, which were the unexpected event or arrivals that made my plans go wild, When I would be set on accomplishing a set of things that day there would be an event or something that would make me put it off a while longer, or I might forget. IT feels realistic and even investing, given that days dont always go as planned IRL and so long as I still have agency (or decisions I can make) if feels like an adventure more so. When my guard was down , I thought less in terms of scores and achievement and and the stories and characters were more engaging and were able to reach me more easily.
One thing I feel could be better is some of the interface to make it easier or more seamless to navigate, just having more of an option when you have a keyboard. It may be lazy of me but at least having a 'Map' key to zoom out to the town, or a key for the character stats and the girls. Over all I feel this would add some some smoothness.
I hesitate to suggest additions to a developer given you probably already have a long enough list and a vision of your own for this project. That being said there a couple things that would be neat to see.
One would be simply an option to go into the wilderness considering how much of it there is on the map (whatever else is included in it, were you to do this, I'm sure you'd do great.)
The second is the ability to alter the main guys responses in conversation or arguments a tad more, to decide your stance with an issue or conflict. Even just more context specific options. For instance when Maxy left it kinda shook me, and my instinct was to talk to the others about it. Though there was no dialogue acknowledging what had transpired though they live in such close proximity, At the very least the main guy would probably be a bit down, perhaps mention it in his interactions.
Last thing I swear, I feel like your game would have a lot more replay ability if it were not possible to romance more than one or all of the girls without some minor-major consequences. Maybe more Friend options, not simply Accept OR Reject. Like some 'Yes and', 'yes but', 'no and', 'no but' responses rather than only the variations of positive or negative, yes or no.
I hope this is helpful if only mildly. Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing how you complete and flesh out everything.
Im low key hoping for an awkward or silly scene between Velvet and Lucky. I've been imagining edgy Kamen Rider vibes from this Velvet.
Some of your ideas will be implemented at some point, but others are too complex for me to do (they require a lot of time to do), for now it's just me working on this game :(
Thank you very much for taking the time to write all this <3
is there/will there ever be hpnosis fetish in the game?
It is a possibility
ok thanks, that would be super dope
Feels like I am going in circles with the girls, not sure how to unlock all of the content. I bought the drum set, screw driver, and the bar but it feels like a stretch between stories and I'm not sure if I am doing it right.
You have to click on that human or person symbol at the top right of the screen and then go to the "Characters" section. Click on the box called "Side Events" for each girl. You can see what you need to do next to trigger a new event. If it says "Chat: Available" Then chat with them some more to trigger new events and dialogue. If it say "Chat:WIP" that means that area is done for now. Focus on other areas. If it says "Practice: Available" practice with her in that area (color) Red practice color means train with her in Fitness. "Beach: Available" means you can go to the beach with her at certain times to trigger more events of new dialogue. If something says "WIP" you can still do i, you just wont trigger a new scene or dialogue. I hope that's what you meant.
Yo so I am stuck on this layla thing it tells me to visit her to checkout her invention but I don't know when or how there doesn't seem to be a hint at all
You have to go visit her during Sunset and either chat with her or train.
What is the save location in windows? Couldn't find it in appdata
Nevermind, found it. FYI Its at appdata>roaming>renpy>lucky project.
Cuando vendra la nueva actualización?
Septiembre, si todo va bien
This is one of the best games ive ever played, your whole work is spectacular and i need this to be a full game, please never abandon this game til it's complete. And... I know is a lot to ask but, in a future version or the complete game can you put a female protagonist version of the story and Lucky? We the lesbi girls don't have games like this and this game is perfect. Keep the hard work, you're doing great 💞
Thank you so much for your words <3
For what you're saying, I think a spin-off version would be better :)
when will it be fully released?
He is the main composer of the game: https://soundcloud.com/hitctrl
Que bueno que conoceremos a la hermana de fresita XD una pregunta en cierta parte de la historia maxy y charlotte hablan de hacer un trio pero charlotte no quiere esa ecena existe a un no?
Aun no
How to Enter antons Room? i finished It all the last Things Is entering the room
Next version c:
Oh ok, But i actualy enter the room But i did not saved It, the nxt time i Play my last load I cant Enter, The last part is About Anton Sacrificing Hes life For the MC and then The Game Quit it Self.
That's the end of the current content c:
hi Stawer gg for the nice game u create...only a little question.....im at day 100 i finish all quest line....now mary and maxy tell me she will come back in a few days but they never come back....how can i visit her home if never compare in the maps??i need to finish 2 special hit with maxy and i die if i cant finish it.....really thanks for all and keep the great work up....
You still have that problem? :o
ok now its working and i finish all...really a nice and good job....thanks for all and keep up the great work...
thanksfully xD
Question stawer were is sasha location to train charisma and lie skill and time cuz i wasn't listening XD
Your room at about noon time if I'm not mistaken.
I'm only on day 34 or something and I must say, Super Super game so far!
Thank you <3
When I download the game it says forbidden content in Android. Please help
It may be a security error and you must give permission to the app
when is pregnancy and such going to be added nothing says it wont be but nothing on its progress either
Much later in the development c:
what about hypnosis?
Yo a la que espero algún día conocer es a la hermana de la fresita caliente jjjj xdxdxd
Aparecerá en la siguiente actualización :D
by the time the next version is ready 0.5b
Once completed, will the game be Free to Play?
Yes
pog
btw: Layla's shower scene is missing in the gallery
I will grind every skill to 300 and the Barrie's popularity will be over 10000. Currently: Fitness 132, Charm 103, Creativity (around) 39, Subtlety 131or133 and Knowledge 105, Barrie's popularity 1567.
Love your game. Every girl is best girl material. If there was a choice it would take me a while to pick one. Well designed characters.
The only thing i take issue with is how they fall for the player out of nowhere (Yui and Maxy). Yui i sort of get and Maxy i sort of get but they fell for Lucky right there and there "poof". I both get it and don't. I'm sure you will explain in further detail for Yui, and hope you will give Maxy a bit more of a reason than just "I just felt like it" which i love. I'm just baffled at how we are a mega chick magnet. Feels wrong to be given a reward such as Maxy's interest, for existing. Good game
That's Maxy's way c:
Thanks for your words <3
Hey just did a video where I recommend the game. Hope more people get to know your game Stawer!
Wow thank you very much for the video!
Happy to help!
dunno where to report this, but: when you finish 4.02 Prim story you get to sleep with her.
I didn't finish her Charisma training scenes beforehand and had done it just after having sex with her. THE PROBLEM IS, in these scenes she is in "being afraid of MC's shlong size" mode
kind of broke my anticipation a little.
Hope there is like alternate cutscene if you already slept with her :)
By the way, I love this game and characters, so thank you Stawer for delivering us this pretty and fun expirionce.
Clearly it is a bug, there are many conditions and ways to progress the story and sometimes mistakes like that occur :(
It will be fixed for the next version, thanks for the comment <3
Whats the next update? Is it 0.5b or 0.6? I still didn't update mine cause I don't know if this only half the part of 0.5
I'm grinding and finnishing Prim scenes first. So... Do i have to go through other characters to go to the beach with Prim? What is the limit for all stats? Is 404 popularity too much?
No - Unlimited - It's a Lot xD!
ah swiggity swooty your game is now in mah lewd game history YOINK mine now........
great game love the story and all the character cant wait for more to be added
Just want to say I really like the game so far. Some things are a little frustrating, but overall I'm really looking forward to seeing more of it.
Beautiful job on the characters btw. I especially like the eyes.
What did you find frustrating?
Being a work in progress, I can improve things through feedback :)
Thanks for playing!
Eh, nothing major and it's probably just me. It's just mildly frustrating trying to raise money and skills and having an entire day eaten up by an event. But I get that that's part of the game.
Can't wait for the free version of 0.5A XD
It will be free, when version 0.5 is complete <3
I can't piss in the toilet. Automatic 0/10
omfg xD
So I've been unable to install the previous update (0.4.0) since it was released. I'm on Android and it has said app not installed every time. I've been waiting for the new update to see if it works. I really enjoy the game and am looking forward to finally being able to play again. Keep up the good work!
You may need to give permissions, and Android is blocking the application... Or maybe you have the previous version already installed, in that case you should backup the saved games...
I hope it helps you <3
Oh I didn't realize I needed to uninstall the old version first. I thought it would update the game. Thanks for replying!
вижу сиськи ставлю лайк ♥
Hello !
I'm only at the begining (around 30 ingame days) but the game looks very good so far ! The story is unfolding slowly but looks really interesting and mysterious, the characters have different and well built personalities so yeah all in all it's quite refreshing playing a game like this and not another "a horny teenager gets in a new town and fucks his relatives on the first day" type of game.
I'm curious if there are any secret/hidden "unlockable" things in the game yet or cheats and if not are you planning to add some in the future ?
For now there is only one secret final event. In version 0.5 there will be a few more, although they are only to complement the main story... For the H content it's much easier and straightforward :)
There may be problems with itch's servers. You can download the version from Patreon's website, it's free: https://www.patreon.com/posts/lucky-paradox-0-37759618
1. Yes. Maybe I'll make a post explaining why that happens and why in such an abrupt way xD
2. Yes. The patreons can try the alpha versions, but when a chapter is complete, it will be published here for free.
For the costume, you must do secondary content with Charlotte.
Thank you for the answers. I just finished it today. Also, can i still use my saved file for the next patch?
Yes
Se me ocurrió algo que creo que sería útil para muchos que donde esta la información del personaje ponga cuanto porsentaje llEva uno con la chica para saber cuando uno termina al 100% todas la escenas, conversaciones y esas cosas ya que aveces nose si seguir cuando dice que espere la próxima actualización o también un sistema de chequeo que en vez del porcentaje que dije ponga por ejemplo
Conversaciones: completado
Ecenas: incompleto
Contenido: incompleto
Algo así si pudieras en algún futuro sería eso nada más y haces un macnifico trabajo te felicito y creo que hablo por toda la comunidad que nos encantó su proyecto
¡Muchas Gracias!
En el estado de personajes te dice como desbloquear contenido secundario y principal. Cuando ya no hay nada nuevo por hacer, sale un WIP (Work in Progress)
Es difícil hacer un sistema con %, ya que muchas cosas cambian o no llegan a suceder, o suceden de una forma distinta según como vallas jugando.
Quizás deba hacer un tutorial para la version 0.5 explicando cositas.
Como puedo encontrarte en disco que no se de eso :, (
El link esta al inicio de la pagina del juego xD
Alli puedes unirte a la comunidad y participar de forma más activa :D
https://discord.gg/vb33F5