Its truly a wonderful game . I will play it until it is fully released . No matter what people say , its hard to make games . Take your time and make it wonderful .
Had fun playing for a bit, the character are interesting a story has thought put into it, good game design and ui. Really like that each girl felt different.
What could use improvement is some of the text/writting needs editorial review, that said I read that the stawer suffers from dyslexia so I appreciate that this is not a priority but having another set of eyes or some kind of croud sourcing option could make things easier. Allot of the time the writting would throw me off the expirience.
I would say that the game felt more like a relationship simulator then a h game given the amount of play conentent vs the amount of h material.
Overall solid game but I don't think I'll come back to it when I have Harem Hotel to play.
I never said that the correction of text was not a priority, I said that I would fix it progressively. I'm even constantly updating that, since I make adjustments every time someone corrects something (except if it's a character's way of talking).
I love the game, thank you, thank you very much. I understand that there are spelling, semantic, syntactic or other linguistic errors because Spanish is not your mother tongue, so I appreciate that you have chosen it as a second language. The story looks interesting, the features you can do and the graphics are good. However, a little more animation would have made it perfect. Greetings from Lima, Peru. I'll see how to support your work
Great game, if not for one moment in Maxy's story when she shouts what she would like for MC to do to her and uses a very negative word, which I hate which in turn makes me hate the game.
So, Overall, I would give game 9/10.Great graphics, interesting story. Nice that despite lack of animation in conversations(H-scenes are animated, don't worry), characters display plenty face expressions. It takes a lot more work but makes game more absorbing. Very good hints how to progress. Good diversity of characters.
For now there does not seems to be anything too dramatic. There are some indications of bad past, but nothing too terrifying to traumatize player. I hope whatever the complete story will be, It might make me sad, but I will be glad to live it through.
It has some misspellings, some sentences are strange sometimes. Might be translation problem.(in case you want, I made screenshots of every sentence and word that is probably incorrect)
BUT
Unfortunately for me, I'm sensitive(some would say, easily traumatized ) to some words, so It was great until that moment on Maxy route.
It would be very nice of author to change that word(for example to "ravage". From my experience, it is has nicer background)
Muy buen juego, hice todo lo que me gusto, definitivamente me quedo con Maxy aunque Layla al final tambien me termino gustando, tipico caracter (tsundere), btw muy buena la traduccion al español, eres bilingüe ? Estaria interesado en ayudar dentro de lo considerable en la version español.
A pretty nice game i've done all the quests for almost all characters, the only ones remaining are the gamble ones that I dont really like, I tryed both lenguages and I can see its good. I would like to help with the translation to spanish (neutral or latin american) since its my main tongue. I'll keep looking for the next updates!
Como hacen el dialogo? primero en español y lo traducen al ingles o viceversa no se porque me intereso tanto, pero creo que me gustó bastante la historia los dialogos de los personajes estan bastante bien, como que va bien acorde a su personalidad
Pedazo de juego, muy bueno, me lo acabe rápido, la historia está muy intrigante y buena, espero que puedan darle un buen final, y te apoyo con lo del no al NTR, esa cosa es del diablo
Приветствую. Твое "творение" улет! Круто сделано, разработка труд не легкий. Терпения и стремления тебе в этом деле. Хотел поинтересоваться, реально будет сделать субтитры игры на русском языке? Как на это смотришь? Я сам из России, не знаю откуда ты) В общем то как говориться, всем не угодить... Но русский язык был бы кстати или хотя бы какой нибудь патч отдельный на смену языка. Наверно большинство пользователей твоей игры иностранцы, но кто знает. Русские тоже имеются) В остальном все четко.
Greetings. Your "creation" will fly away! Cool done, the development of labor is not easy. Patience and desire for you in this matter. I wanted to ask if it would really make the subtitles of the game in Russian? How do you look at it? I myself am from Russia, I don’t know where you are from) In general, as they say, I can’t please everyone ... But the Russian language would be welcome or at least some kind of patch separate for changing the language. Probably most of the users of your game are foreigners, but who knows. Russians are also available) Otherwise, everything is clear.
Enserio este un juego muy bueno, estoy ansioso para poder seguir jugando.
La historia me tiene muy intrigado y es muy interesante, ya que completa todo el juego desde la última versión y ya no puedo avanzar más es la historia.
Y te felicito por el trabajo que hay en este juego.
también quiero decir que su proyecto necesita algunos alegros, y espero a que puedas arreglar y optimizar el juego.
Enserio este un juego muy bueno y estoy ansioso para poder seguir jugando
La historia me tiene muy intrigado y es muy interesante, ya que complete todo el juego desde la última versión y ya no puedo avanzar más es la historia
Y te felicito por el trabajo que hay en este juego
Es una actualización técnica. Agrega la nueva tienda, un sistema de disfraces (Solo hay uno por ahora) y de regalos, que ayudaran a agregar nuevo contenido en la versión 0.4 :)
Great game. Two questions tho, where is Layla, and how do you get past the 'We could sleep together" part of Yui's questline. I have been on it for so long and I have slept with her so many times and nothing has happened. Am I missing something?
its keep bugging me when we ask for Yui to work and we get free day. But its really nothing to do when morning maybe you planing something for that? do you have a plan for another girl? like one at library and 2 at casinos join the harem.
Great game, needs more content, everyone please go fund
personal likes: simple hotel management, free world roaming/decision, attributes to improve, area improvements, worry free character development (you don't need to scum save every 5s for every outcome paths)
personal dislikes: I don't like the goth girl touching my Prim so early in with no consequences and also, the appeal attribute decays too fast
Good afternoon. If it's not a secret, then with what help did you make the graphics in the game? (Do you have any lessons on this program?). I also want to create my own game, but I can not draw.
you can work with someone who can do the draw, if your game great and many people who donate for your game developing i think its worth for both of you and the drawer.
AMAZING GAME! Great writing and amazing plot, all of the content is great. The girls are amazing, each one has a great personality and it is actually great. I personally love the time managment aspect of it, it reminds me of the Persona games to a degree. And I really love each and every part of this game and i look forward to more updates and everything that comes with it !!^
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Fantastic game! Romance-oriented this game. The character interaction feels organic too! (Save for Yui but that's her quirk!)
Looking forward to the final version!
I'm glad to read that :D
i never thought a h-game would make me sad but it did not gonna spoil it but good game hope you keep working on it its a awesome game love you :)
el juego esta muy genial es muy adictivo sigan asi sigo esperando la actualizacion ;)
A finales de este mes o principios del próximo debería estar terminada la actualización :D
Great game, but how do i go on a date with somebody after its unlocked?
As you progress through a girl's story, you unlock more content and activities :)
To do an activity, you must talk to a girl.
Hi! I just played your game and loved it.
I'll be following you progress 👍
Thank you very much! I hope you like what's coming too :)
Its truly a wonderful game . I will play it until it is fully released . No matter what people say , its hard to make games . Take your time and make it wonderful .
Haha, Thank you <3
Had fun playing for a bit, the character are interesting a story has thought put into it, good game design and ui. Really like that each girl felt different.
What could use improvement is some of the text/writting needs editorial review, that said I read that the stawer suffers from dyslexia so I appreciate that this is not a priority but having another set of eyes or some kind of croud sourcing option could make things easier. Allot of the time the writting would throw me off the expirience.
I would say that the game felt more like a relationship simulator then a h game given the amount of play conentent vs the amount of h material.
Overall solid game but I don't think I'll come back to it when I have Harem Hotel to play.
I never said that the correction of text was not a priority, I said that I would fix it progressively. I'm even constantly updating that, since I make adjustments every time someone corrects something (except if it's a character's way of talking).
Writing*, crowd*, a lot*, writing*, experience*, than*.
Felt that your comment was in need of an editorial review since the writing would throw me off the experience.
As an English major, I approve this message.
This is the best novel I have read in a long time can't wait to see what happens next!!
I love the game, thank you, thank you very much.
I understand that there are spelling, semantic, syntactic or other linguistic errors because Spanish is not your mother tongue, so I appreciate that you have chosen it as a second language. The story looks interesting, the features you can do and the graphics are good. However, a little more animation would have made it perfect. Greetings from Lima, Peru. I'll see how to support your work
Thank you very much for playing!
I suffer from a little bit of dyslexia, but I will progressively fix the texts :)
❤️❤️❤️❤️
Great game, if not for one moment in Maxy's story when she shouts what she would like for MC to do to her and uses a very negative word, which I hate which in turn makes me hate the game.
So, Overall, I would give game 9/10.Great graphics, interesting story. Nice that despite lack of animation in conversations(H-scenes are animated, don't worry), characters display plenty face expressions. It takes a lot more work but makes game more absorbing. Very good hints how to progress. Good diversity of characters.
For now there does not seems to be anything too dramatic. There are some indications of bad past, but nothing too terrifying to traumatize player. I hope whatever the complete story will be, It might make me sad, but I will be glad to live it through.
It has some misspellings, some sentences are strange sometimes. Might be translation problem.(in case you want, I made screenshots of every sentence and word that is probably incorrect)
BUT
Unfortunately for me, I'm sensitive(some would say, easily traumatized ) to some words, so It was great until that moment on Maxy route.
It would be very nice of author to change that word(for example to "ravage". From my experience, it is has nicer background)
And because of that, My final score - 4/10
It may be the wrong word...
Thanks for the feedback :)
I never thought a porn game could make me sad, yet here I am. Good job!
As president of the "Laylah is best girl" Faction im disappointed.
Um, wow. I really like this game. Like, I started playing and suddenly it was 4AM, really like this game.
Muy buen juego, hice todo lo que me gusto, definitivamente me quedo con Maxy aunque Layla al final tambien me termino gustando, tipico caracter (tsundere), btw muy buena la traduccion al español, eres bilingüe ? Estaria interesado en ayudar dentro de lo considerable en la version español.
A pretty nice game i've done all the quests for almost all characters, the only ones remaining are the gamble ones that I dont really like, I tryed both lenguages and I can see its good. I would like to help with the translation to spanish (neutral or latin american) since its my main tongue. I'll keep looking for the next updates!
Muchas Gracias!
Cualquier ayuda es bienvenida :)
Como hacen el dialogo? primero en español y lo traducen al ingles o viceversa no se porque me intereso tanto, pero creo que me gustó bastante la historia los dialogos de los personajes estan bastante bien, como que va bien acorde a su personalidad
Primero lo hago en español.
Pedazo de juego, muy bueno, me lo acabe rápido, la historia está muy intrigante y buena, espero que puedan darle un buen final, y te apoyo con lo del no al NTR, esa cosa es del diablo
"Fetishes that will never be included: NTR."
A god has been descend upon us, Thank you soo much for that, I will definitely play your game!
is this game includes femdom
one pretty soft scene in Maxy's story.
Приветствую. Твое "творение" улет! Круто сделано, разработка труд не легкий. Терпения и стремления тебе в этом деле. Хотел поинтересоваться, реально будет сделать субтитры игры на русском языке? Как на это смотришь? Я сам из России, не знаю откуда ты) В общем то как говориться, всем не угодить... Но русский язык был бы кстати или хотя бы какой нибудь патч отдельный на смену языка. Наверно большинство пользователей твоей игры иностранцы, но кто знает. Русские тоже имеются) В остальном все четко.
Greetings. Your "creation" will fly away! Cool done, the development of labor is not easy. Patience and desire for you in this matter. I wanted to ask if it would really make the subtitles of the game in Russian? How do you look at it? I myself am from Russia, I don’t know where you are from) In general, as they say, I can’t please everyone ... But the Russian language would be welcome or at least some kind of patch separate for changing the language. Probably most of the users of your game are foreigners, but who knows. Russians are also available) Otherwise, everything is clear.
If you want to do a Russian translation, that would be great. I can provide you with the necessary files at any time :)
So I finished the main Sasha content for the version and it says the side events are available. Where can I find her to actually do the side events?
In your room at noon. Sorry for the delay :c
Thie story got a lot more complicated then I thought it would.
Amazing game can't wait for the next update.
Enserio este un juego muy bueno, estoy ansioso para poder seguir jugando.
La historia me tiene muy intrigado y es muy interesante, ya que completa todo el juego desde la última versión y ya no puedo avanzar más es la historia.
Y te felicito por el trabajo que hay en este juego.
también quiero decir que su proyecto necesita algunos alegros, y espero a que puedas arreglar y optimizar el juego.
El juego está en constante desarrollo. Espero ir realizando todas las mejoras pertinentes con el tiempo :)
Enserio este un juego muy bueno y estoy ansioso para poder seguir jugando
La historia me tiene muy intrigado y es muy interesante, ya que complete todo el juego desde la última versión y ya no puedo avanzar más es la historia
Y te felicito por el trabajo que hay en este juego
Muchas Gracias por jugar :D
Me motivas a seguir trabajando en esto :)
<3 el juego ya está terminado en la versión 3.5?
Es una actualización técnica. Agrega la nueva tienda, un sistema de disfraces (Solo hay uno por ahora) y de regalos, que ayudaran a agregar nuevo contenido en la versión 0.4 :)
Great game. Two questions tho, where is Layla, and how do you get past the 'We could sleep together" part of Yui's questline. I have been on it for so long and I have slept with her so many times and nothing has happened. Am I missing something?
No, i have done the same and i thing that is all for now
lets just hope that there is more to do on the next update
I just uploaded a fix for Yui's bug. You should be able to advance without problems (Android version still missing)
I miss maxy i cant wait til she come back
So sad, she is a great girl, is so beautiful.
Welcome to Argleton, a charming city disconnected from the rest of the world, where you can relax, visit places of interest and fondle titties.
what the different between free and pay?
this game is good give me some spoiler for the fullgame.
:D
No difference. It's just a tip to continue the development of the game. You can try out the new content before it goes public :)
how to get layla "Remember" pop up? i keep dating her at weekend ( cause its only that activity give heart at the moment)
Making progress on her fitness events :P
its keep bugging me when we ask for Yui to work and we get free day. But its really nothing to do when morning maybe you planing something for that?
do you have a plan for another girl? like one at library and 2 at casinos join the harem.
Very intriguing game. Ill be sure to donate some cash for the continue keep your great work. I need to know more.
Thank you :D
"There are consequences from this point forward" well that was fucking ominous
I hope that's not a bad thing xD
Great game, needs more content, everyone please go fund
personal likes: simple hotel management, free world roaming/decision, attributes to improve, area improvements, worry free character development (you don't need to scum save every 5s for every outcome paths)
personal dislikes: I don't like the goth girl touching my Prim so early in with no consequences and also, the appeal attribute decays too fast
What is the max pop you can raise your restaurant?
Unlimited for now, it's still a work in progress :)
This was enjoyable. I eagerly await the next update
I really loved it ^^
Waiting for the next update, amazing game bro
Good afternoon. If it's not a secret, then with what help did you make the graphics in the game? (Do you have any lessons on this program?). I also want to create my own game, but I can not draw.
you can work with someone who can do the draw, if your game great and many people who donate for your game developing i think its worth for both of you and the drawer.
AMAZING GAME! Great writing and amazing plot, all of the content is great. The girls are amazing, each one has a great personality and it is actually great. I personally love the time managment aspect of it, it reminds me of the Persona games to a degree. And I really love each and every part of this game and i look forward to more updates and everything that comes with it !!^
Perfect game, cute girls (Prim the most cutest), adicional content coming, this game is perfect
Nice game. The restaurant management, cute girls (Prim is the cutest). Some of them are creepy, soime of them are cold but each of them like MC.
Waiting for updates
I loved the game and the girls so cute.
Waiting for the next update and promise support when receive the money, you deserve that
Thanks for your help :D
You expected a review but it was, I dio
You expected a reply but it was, i Stawer >8D